The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/17
I found this very genuine with an unusual perspective and an ending with a twist. Great story.
03/12/17
Your writing amazes me. You are definitely uniquely gifted. One more awesome story.
03/13/17
Well done,
Blessings~
03/13/17
Great job! I felt like i could see the setting and know the characters.
03/14/17
You know a story is good if you want to read more, after you reach the end. Great job. Hit the topic, very creative and well written. I thought the ending was too abrupt, but very good. Excellent job. You kept on point the whole time. A winner!
03/15/17
Very good story. I enjoyed it very much.
03/19/17
Congratulations on your 5th place finish this week, Jack.

I enjoyed the different perspective of the story. It really made me appreciate my sense of hearing in a new way.

I wondered why you didn't capitalize both Grandma and Rose.