The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/17
You've painted a beautiful place for your MC's struggle. I could feel the breeze...and maybe because it's winter...I longed to put my feet on the green lawn. Your piece brought to life the truth of that eternal, supernatural conflict. If only folks could really see beneath all the fake beauty. Thanks for sharing.
Wow what a stunning story and lesson. I could feel the undertones right from the beginning and it compelled me onward. Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!