The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/16
That was a great ending that I, and I'm "betting" very few will have seen coming!

Really cute.

Well done,

Blessings~
04/21/16
Loved it - though "Hold 'Em" in your title could infer more than one marriage partner. A case of infer-delity???
Apart from that vitally-inconsequential point, your ending pulled a great rug from beneath my feet!
Well done.
I love this. I don't get surprised by endings often and I thought for sure this was another story about taking a gamble on God, but your ending is nothing short of brilliant. I'm not big on titles either, but this one is divine. Definitely one of my favorites so far.
04/28/16
Congrats!

Blessings~
Yay! I'm so happy this did well! Happy Dance!
Loved the surprise ending....congrats!
04/28/16
Congratulations, Donna, on your well deserved 2nd place award. I sensed that the story wasn't about cards, but never guessed the ending. You were able to say so much in so few words.
Awesome, Donna. Congratulations!
05/01/16
Congratulations on your placing for a great entry. Well done.
05/11/16
What a beautiful surprise ending. Big smile on my face, you got me!