The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/16
I really enjoyed this. You did a great job. I also like that you left the ending sort of up in the air.
03/17/16
I enjoyed getting to know the old man through his journal writings. This was a creative approach to the topic. Well-written with a great message!
I think this is quite clever. You did an outstanding job of staying true to the POV. You made me smile and chuckle while simultaneously feeling a sense of sadness for the MC. Congratulations on ranking 20th overall.