The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/16
You have expressed so much grace in this entry, but I'm not sure how clearly the topic is in view... But I have been wrong before - at least twice ;-)
02/13/16
Oh, yes. That first stanza....yum, yum, yum....tiny babies, you just want to eat them up--delicious!

I had the privilege of one baby. I'll never forget the feeling.
02/14/16
I like the format of this poem.
02/18/16
My sister whenever she holds a baby she always says, "Mmmm...delicious" And, I've since heard others say the same thing...so you're on topic for that aspect for sure!

Well done, I enjoyed this piece.

Blessings~
02/18/16
Congrats!
Blessings~
Congratulations on EC for this beautiful poem. I read and remember--children and grandchildren, now great grandchildren. The joy never dims!
02/18/16
Congratulations, Jody, on your poem placing 6th overall in the EC category. Children are truly a gift from God.
02/18/16
I love this, and I agree. Babies are delicious. Congrats on the EC.
Lovely! Congrats!
02/21/16
Congrats on your EC for this sweet poem with its different take on "delicious". Well written.