The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/16
I enjoyed this entry from beginning to end. A lot of musings and truths, well done.

God bless~
02/01/16
Inner warmth against the external cold. Beautifully described.
02/03/16
The Welcome Wagon is new to me; what a lovely idea! The oldest child point of view lends pathos to this story. A pleasure to read.
Congratulations, Jody! This is a beautiful story, with an authentic voice and vivid descriptions. I felt like I was on the journey with them.
02/04/16
Congratulations, Jody, on your 9th place EC award.

I remember we had a welcoming committee when we moved when I was eight. One neighbor brought freshly baked bread and another one a plant.
02/04/16
Well done for your EC placing. Congratulations.
02/05/16
Congrats Jody! I really enjoyed this story of the Jones family. Great writing!
02/10/16
Congrats!

God bless~
02/16/16
I really enjoyed your authentic peek into the recollections of the siblings.