The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/16
Many people have a difficult time asking for help. It was nice that the MC was there for her.
01/24/16
This was subtle,yet powerful. I like the way you brought out the scene without over dramatizing. It came across as very real and very convicting.
01/25/16
What a tender story! Made me want to find someone to visit; it really did. If only we'd realize how important such brief visits are to the elderly, and how much they always bless us, we'd all be quicker on the offer of sharing a cup of tea. I loved your story.
01/25/16
The popular song, 'People Need the LORD' comes to mind. So true... Barbara Streisand's 'People' follows. People need people, caring & compassionate people. I once had a friendship with an elderly lady that began badly but God transformed it in a short time...

Wing His Words
This reminded me of other proud strong women I've known. Proverbs 31 describes the godly woman as being dignified. Thanks for the verbal exchange between the women depicting this. Nice.