The Official Writing Challenge
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What an absolutely delightful story. I truly enjoyed the read.
11/13/15
I like how you've captured the clutter and the musings of your hero with the classy name - and I enjoyed the 'shelf'-ish tone of the ending. Well done.
11/14/15
So entertaining! That playful tone allowed you to poke fun at your mc, as he provided commentary for his own life, all w/out belittling the character. Delightful. Well done
11/14/15
A delightful read. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.
11/15/15
Oh this was so captivating and cute beginning to end! Poor Benny! I could picture his space being invaded by the elephants and candlesticks and then the unexpected funny ending was terrific! What a fun read! Great job!
Congratulations on ranking 15th overall! Happy Dance!