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I enjoyed this. The plot was well constructed and it knitted together very smoothly. I felt for your MC in her predicament! I did notice a few places where commas were missing, but nonetheless an enjoyable read. Well done!
11/12/15
A neat little cameo with a good mix of fun and suspense - plus the seeds of a romance...
Well done.
11/12/15
Enjoyed this...a mini romance novella! Cute and charming! You write romance so well! Maybe Stacy and Luke will grow into a full novel!
I enjoyed the chemistry been the MC and the mysterious stranger.I began to wonder why she sat there shivering until you told us at the end. A delightful read
I enjoyed this. I thought for sure her interview would be with her rescuer. I liked your ending way better. Be careful about the POV shift (she wouldn't know he was watching her walk away unless she looked back. If the MC doesn't know, the reader shouldn't either. She could have glanced back and see him watching.) I did like your take on the topic. You did a great job of starting off with the conflict right away. This is a great story. Congratulations on ranking 24 overall! Happy Dance!