The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved how you showed the topic so well. I also loved the way you created an atmosphere. Great piece and great message! Well done.
This would make a good beginning for a full length allegorical novel. Reminiscent of Hannah Hurnard's work and her sweet character of little "Much-Afraid" on her journey toward the heights.

Please continue this type of writing, but with many, many proof-reads and revisions, which always polishes things up better and better. This should do well. I loved it!
I loved reading this, especially the part with the stones. You described that so well. Great job.

God bless. :)
Fantastic read! I too was reminded of HINDS FEET ON HIGH PLACES by Hannah Hurnard. A winner for sure!
Interesting story. I like your ability to paint the picture, and convey the story.
Congratulations on your 6th place EC award, Yvonne.

A wonderfully written allegory.
This is wonderful - just full of parable truth and beautifully written. So many lessons in this story. Thank you for writing this and many congrats on your EC.
Congrats! Well earned EC!
Congratulations on your EC!

Congratulations for a well deserved EC!

God bless~
Congratulations, Yvonne, on your EC. Your story is rich with imagery and messages, and very well told.
Congrats, Vonnie. I love all your Scripture allusions and quotations. Wonderful creativity!