The Official Writing Challenge
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This is my favorite of the entries in this level. Perhaps that's because you had me right there with you...what a blessing to have a fifth freckle.
I am an identical twin, so you had me from the title. Sometimes it is difficult to understand the doctor when he is trying to explain a procedure or situation.
I loved your descriptions. The emotions conveyed brought me into your pain and confusion. Well done.
Congratulations on placing 10th overall and winning an EC, Donna. This story really touched my heart.
This is such a touching story and beautifully written. Many congrats on your well deserved EC.
I loved the descriptions p and the way you portrayed the relationships between your characters. Congratulations on your EC!
Congratulations, Donna, on your EC. I love the way you have used this topic and the way you describe one twin's care for the other. Great writing!