The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/15
This is my favorite of the entries in this level. Perhaps that's because you had me right there with you...what a blessing to have a fifth freckle.
10/25/15
I am an identical twin, so you had me from the title. Sometimes it is difficult to understand the doctor when he is trying to explain a procedure or situation.
10/28/15
I loved your descriptions. The emotions conveyed brought me into your pain and confusion. Well done.
10/29/15
Congratulations on placing 10th overall and winning an EC, Donna. This story really touched my heart.
This is such a touching story and beautifully written. Many congrats on your well deserved EC.
I loved the descriptions p and the way you portrayed the relationships between your characters. Congratulations on your EC!
10/30/15
Congratulations, Donna, on your EC. I love the way you have used this topic and the way you describe one twin's care for the other. Great writing!