The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/15
A clever allegory of an existence that is only looking and not belonging - instead of enjoying and sharing the grace of God up close and personal.
08/29/15
Oh, this was so beautiful it touched my heart.

Poignant and moving.

God bless~
A clever allegory of God's love and redemption. His grace far surpasses our own understanding A piece that gives of hope of a future with God up to our dying breathe if we just confess.
09/01/15
I'm so glad God gives us mercy when we don't deserve it.
09/03/15
Congrats!
God bless~
This is lovely - very well written with a great message. Well done. Congrats.
09/05/15
Congratulations on your EC. You've taken a very creative approach to the topic in your lovely poem.
09/05/15
Really enjoyed your poem and almost sang my way through your excellent lyrical meter.