The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/15
There is a show called, "what would you do?" It experimented about beauty versus homely...plus heavy versus skinny. It's interesting watching people's reactions based on appearances. Most times, it's actually quite sad.

Your story was interesting and on topic.

God bless~
Powerful message. I think this probably speaks to us all.

Well done and God bless!
Congratulations on ranking 6th in level 4 and 16 overall. Happy Dance!
I think this should have ranked even higher. You did a fabulous job of showing not telling, and left it mostly up to the reader to absorb the message about hypocrisy.