The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/15
Your story is very moving, and sounds like it's based in reality. I had a difficult time discerning the family relationship of your characters at first, but a 2nd, more careful reading made it more clear. (Could just be me.) The the little formatting issue with italics is understandable shouldn't a major issue. I do wonder who your MC's family is that an amusement park would be shut down for them, but I grew up in a small town so I have some idea. :) I really enjoyed reading your entry!
07/10/15
Wow- Touching & so moving.

God bless~
I thought this was a beautiful and poignant story. I thought your description of the extremes of weather was brilliant. I didn't realise til the end what Kate's last request to her daughters meant - I misunderstood your meaning completely. This is a piece I will remember. Awesome job!