The Official Writing Challenge
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07/10/15
Interesting and entertaining.

God bless~
I thought this was a very original take on the topic. I had to read it through a couple of times before I cottoned on, but once I had I enjoyed all the clever details. I loved the interaction between the different characters. Well done!
07/12/15
This was ingenious! I had some confusion at first but once I caught on it all fell in place. I loved this!
07/12/15
Very clever and definitely out of the box thinking. I had to read slowly to absorb the details but once it clicked, I got it. Great job.
07/13/15
Clever, creative and original - very entertaining! I had a hard time keep the characters straight at first (I thought Pete was Ned's dad) but I when I caught on about halfway through it got clearer. A second read was even more enjoyable. I found it interesting that the grandfather and the father weren't given names, and I keep trying to find a meaning to that. I like this entry very much!
Wow! This was so convoluted and crazy I thought Noel must have written it! This is high praise indeed, as you will find in reading his zanies. Great job!
Congratulations on ranking 12th overall! Happy Dance!