The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/15
This story is packed with gems. Compassion from one, why we should not judge others, be aware of the log in our own eye, not the speck in another's. Though we may have a good purpose in mind, it's how we go about making the change that counts. Liked your characters, especially the kind-hearted man who had lost his leg. Great job.
I loved the gentle humour, which was coupled so masterfully with a deadly serious message about having the right attitude towards the people we're trying to reach. Great piece!
05/26/15
Packed with gentle wisdom, humour and self-rebuke. Great work again.
Love the title and the content! Excellent!
This is a delightful and charming story. The ladies certainly had good intentions but we're misguided in their approach.

Congratulations on your EC award!
05/28/15
Congratulations on your win. Great work.
05/29/15
Congratulations, Ann, on yet another great story, and your win. Most deserved. I loved your alliterative title, and the rest too.
Congratulations on a fantastic piece and a well-deserved win!