The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/15
I like this. And yes, if God asks, we are all to tempted to say "no." Praying for you and your loneliness, too.
05/19/15
Such emotions packed into a few words! I like the marine words inserted throughout.
I assumed you had lost a husband, although I didn't catch who the "him" was.
Good descriptions.
Congratulations on ranking 19th overall! Happy Dance!