The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/15
Wow, this is really beautiful - great writing here! Kudos...
04/09/15
Truly enjoyed the way your words put pictures to the emotions and circumstances of life. And of course the ending tied it all together beautifully.
04/10/15
Absolutely beautiful. I like the smooth flow of the words and the powerful message those words convey.
Your poetry is nothing short of amazing. You've hit the topic and done so in such a beautiful, uplifting way. I will remember this piece. And thank you for sharing it.
I thought this was great the first time I read it, and even more so this second time. So many of the verses I can identify with - your lovely descriptive poetry is 'spot-on' as usual and always a great blessing to read.
04/11/15
Little doubt why your entry is in Masters - Level 4.
I'm not big on today's poetry but still....

This was great!
04/12/15
Lovely, Verna. You never disappoint me. This says it all.
04/12/15
That truck has been dropping a lot of packages I did not order at my house. Thanks for a good read.
04/12/15
This is one of my favorites. Each metaphor in each stanza so beautifully describes life's trials. I, too, love the "truck of troubles" and the "husk that girds me weakens and cracks." I love the way you've combined imagery and poetic elements to create an exquisite work brimming with comfort. This is gorgeous X 100! <3
04/14/15
Beautiful!

God bless~
04/15/15
A lovely poem of lovely imagery and a great message.
Beautiful piece. Congratulations on ranking 13 overall! Happy Dance!