The Official Writing Challenge
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Brilliant piece, the scene with the waiter at the end was an unexpected but brilliant twist, which brought home the topic. Amazing writing, as always, my friend. Well done!
Powerfully captivating! The main course flounced off, but the waiter made it to a terrific ending - or start?
03/02/15
Very interesting piece of drama. I like the twist at the end. We know one soul is going to be saved.
03/02/15
Creative and interesting story!

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 15th overall! Happy Dance!