The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/15
I like the imagery of this poem - the storm, the self-pity, the Shepherd. At first, I wasn't sure how it fit the topic of pride, but I can see how it displays the pride of winning - in contrast of submitting to God's teaching through humility. Well done.
03/02/15
Well done. I applaud your creativity and your message contained in this piece.

God bless~
03/05/15
Congrats!

God Bless~