The Official Writing Challenge
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What a fun read! And tragically - so easy to relate to. I love all the droll names . . .
I had a feeling I knew who wrote this :) Highly clever approach to the topic, both in its content and format, given that gluttony has the potential to kill. The message comes through very clearly but without being at all preachy. Definitely one of my favourites this week. Great piece!
This was certainly a fun read and sobering lesson. I love your play on names too.
01/25/15
An original take on the topic and written in a fun way. I love the names you created.
01/25/15
See you in the winner's circle. Good job.

God bless~
01/25/15
Whatever you do, doughnut stop entering these Challenges. Very clever and gently-rebuking entry.
Wow!A really enjoyable read. Loved how you made up the names. All the best.
01/28/15
Certainly not an obituary anyone would hope to see written about themselves. Clever—just encasing the message in an obituary makes it more powerful and to the point. Well Done.