The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/15
Great historical fiction(?)- the dialog is excellent, and I aspire to have your talent. The topic is not coming across strongly for me - it's there, but not what I take away, despite the awesome closing. Your gospel message really made me love this story. It came naturally in the flow, as a PART of the story. And that's what I took away.
That's a good thing. :)
01/25/15
I enjoyed your well written entry...nicely done.

God bless~
01/29/15
Loved your between the lines story! Well Done!
01/29/15
Congrats!

God bless~