The Official Writing Challenge
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Awwww! What a beautiful story. This will definitely be noticed by the judges.

Great job.
God bless~
Pulled me in from the first word, and I liked how the action started right away. Well done.
Plenty of action and energy throughout, interspersed with great descriptions and credible dialogue and reflection. Should rate highly.
I thought this was very credible. The story pulled me right in to the point where I could imagine standing there watching the whole scene. Great job!
I really enjoyed your story. Lots of emotional appeal in this fast paced adventure with a happy ending.
That was wonderful! Such vibrant images. I could see the whole thing so clearly.

Whew! Had me on the edge of my seat hoping that they would make it. I'm glad they didn't leave the dog behind.
Congrats Milly!

I knew this would get noticed!

God bless~
Congratulations. I love an inspiring story and this one has everything. God bless