The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/14
Wow - great story and powerful close!

God bless~
11/22/14
Out of the frying pan...
I'd love to read the next few chapters, to find out of pride really comes before a fall.
11/27/14
Well done bro
Oh my word! Brilliant story told well. I loved the descriptions and the palpable tension. Congratulations on your placing!
11/27/14
The Kanes clearly think you're Abel to pull a story together. I'll have to agree with them - and with the judges. Well done on your EC
11/27/14
Ha ha!! A never-to-be-forgotten moment! The things one does when one is young :) Just glad that you quite literally lived to tell the tale. Well told, albeit with some artistic licence! Congratulations on the EC. xx
11/27/14
PS I don't remember any use of expletives. You must be more sanctified than you care to admit.
11/28/14
Congrats!
God bless~
Congratulations. A great adventure story. Well told.