The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/14
Nice! :)
11/15/14
Well written...I enjoyed it!

God bless~
11/15/14
Thanks for sharing your adventure! The bartering lesson made me laugh and the ending caused me to pause and remember our blessings.
Getting to grips with local customs is a big part of travel and you captured that nicely. I loved the message in here, too.

11/19/14
Your title began a great illustration of how many tropical 'get a ways' mix commerce with pleasure.

I really liked how you threw in the element of unease at being in an underdeveloped country, with its unique customs.
11/21/14
Oh, I really enjoyed this account of your Balinese holiday! Your descriptions were enchanting and gave me vivid mind-pictures of the place! Great job! :)
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall! Happy Dance!