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11/07/14
Loved the title, and how you build towards fulfilling it against the demeaning content of a vile insult to humanity. It struck home as last year when I visited Italy I saw so many Africans on the streets; some trading and some begging. You've filled in the back story of their struggle so clearly. Well done.
11/08/14
Written with a powerful hand to bring forth such a powerful message. Well done.

Thanks for sharing this jarring message.

God bless~
11/09/14
Such an excellent story. It's a shame people often do not value others. Forget about the color of their skin how would we feel if it was our children being so degredaded. Thanks for reminding us of such suffering
11/10/14
You have shared a story which needs to be told. I was glued to the end.
That was incredibly well written. Very touching and so real.
Your story made the condition very real. I'm glad you gave this a happy ending because of a caring person who presented Jesus.
Oh, I knew where you were going right off. I wanted to scream, Don't go!" You did a phenomenal job of writing to genre. I hope this makes the difference in at least one girl's life. I just prayed for all the sex-traffic girls because of your words and I know God is acting on those prayers. Congratulations on ranking 12 overall! Happy Dance!