The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/14
Masterfully descriptive and touching story. You captured the bitter-sweet essence of memories after a life shared as one. Great job on this one. I was astounded that there were no comments yet. This is a good read.
This beautifully written piece gripped my heart.
08/20/14
Awwwww. Loved this poignant masterpiece.

God bless~
Nothing is as sad as those memories of our departed loved ones that we shared so much with. The lines of Wordsworth were turned well to your use.The image of loneliness exploding into a hundred golden memories will be memorable. Thank you for sharing your precious heart.
What a wonderful story, it touches the heart with its truth and tenderness. Many congratulations on your well deserved high placing.
What a poignant story of a love etched indelibly in memory. Congratulations on your placement.
08/21/14
I love this beautiful story and could feel the love in your vivid descriptions. Congratulations on your well-deserved EC.
08/21/14
Congrats!

God bless~