The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/14
Nice easy tempo in this entry. I'm not able to critique poetry, but I did enjoy it very much.
I loved the many metaphors here to describe husband and wife!
08/20/14
Beautifully done.

God bless~
This is simply exquisite. And I love your title. "They Are" definitely reminds me of God's "I Am." A poem of great and eternal love.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall.