The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/14
The title was supposed to be GROOM & BRIDE. I had fixed it prior to submission, or so I thought!

Please as you comment, I'd appreciate you looking beyond the "typo" in the title.

Thank you all.

God bless~
08/14/14
How beautiful! I'm pretty sure your Heavenly Bridegroom is smiling; His heart warmed by your expression. Equally, I'd bet that He's so happy with your gift to Him here that He would squeeze you and say, "I'd bbe delighted to be your grom, as much as your groom." He loves you and this piece really shows that you return His love. Thanks for sharing it with us.
08/14/14
This touched my heart and soul on so many levels, left me with joyful tears in my eyes. Just an excellent piece of free verse poetry with perfect flow and rhythm.

I loved the line about Jesus coming to look for me, because He definitely did in my case.

I don't know how to express the joy and peace this brought to me just now. You are a wonderful writer, both prose and poetry.

This speaks to me.

Blessings, Lynn
A powerful message comes through in each word. You have a gift with writing that I admire in each and every poem and article you have written since I joined Faithwriters. I look forward every week to reading your inspirational words.

God Bless!
08/15/14
Beautiful love story that you have experienced first hand!

Wing His Words
08/16/14
Beautiful expressions of the greatest love and most faithful of loves. I knew someone would use this take on the topic and you did it so well! What a strong message is sent through the all satisfying relationship you describe here. Great work!
Beautiful witness for bride of Christ
08/21/14
What a beautifully-crafted, uplifting poem. This makes the heart rejoice--"He is my forever more and eternal salvation." I love your message!
Congratulations on ranking 20 overall! Happy Dance!
This is so beautiful. The passion is palpable. You're an amazing bride and your words bless me.