The Official Writing Challenge
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This is outstanding in every way. Well told, on topic, creative, inspiring...should I go on?

You are on my favorite list this week.

Great writing.
This is a fascinating story. I especially enjoyed the point the chief made at the end. You did a fine job of writing on topic too.
Lovely and beautiful approach to the topic.

Well done.

God bless~
Well written and very descriptive.

I liked the dialect of the native. It added validity to the conversation.

Great job!

God bless
You made want more. I was hoping along with Arthur for a solid conversion. The bane of many missionaries is years of labor with no indication of fruit. Though I don't recall all the names and exact locations, my studies revealed missionaries waiting, some 7 years and some 14 years for the very first convert. Yet others building on the foundation they laid, many souls have now been saved.

Great story telling and a good read.
Creative and well written. I really enjoyed this story. Congratulations on your EC. Well deserved.
Congratulations on EC for this excellent short story. Your characterization is outstanding.
Wonderful story.

Hugs! Congratulations!
Wonderful and moving. Oh, how I love missionary stories! Great job, Pauline. Congratulations and God bless!
Really nicely constructed missionary perseverance story.
I wonder how many thousands of similar scenarios take place around the world.
Thank you for reminding me to pray for the selfless cross bearers stationed throughout the globe.

God bless~
Congrats on your placement. I told you it was one of my favorites.
Wonderfully told. Beautiful. Congratulations!