The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/14
Clever profiling of the two Emmaus-bound disciples late tha afternoon, all the more because of the structure you have employed in telling the story.
02/18/14
Excellent job!

God bless~
02/20/14
I think this is fantastic. I love the Emmaus Road story and the transformation of "we two." Your writing is wonderful. The hope they felt was tangible through your writing. I especially like your repeated stanza and your words are just beautiful.
Congratulations in ranking 35 overall!