The Official Writing Challenge
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This take on the first temptation is wonderfully written. You do a great job showing how Adam and Eve went from being totally at peace to suddenly quite rattled. Nice work.
Just as soon as I caught on that this was Adam and Eve, I smiled. What a wonderful, descriptive presentation of the Scripture!
Congratulations on ranking 8 in your level and 15 overall!