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This a beautiful account of this moving Bible story. You bring out the adventure, tension and emotion very well.
You did a thrilling job with this. The added emotion and suspense was a perfect touch. I don't remember this verse/story but I will from now on. Outstanding.
Oh, how you masterfully brought the scripture to life! I was captivated beginning to end. As Shan said, you brought it to life so vividly, it was like seeing it happen…and certainly made an impact for remembering this biblical tale. I love how David, saw the cost of getting that water and deemed it too precious and valuable for anyone but God to drink! What a wonderful story of sacrifice, both by David’s men and David himself. Thank you for having us ponder a story not so often dwelt on!
Fantastic job with this Biblical account. Excellent!

God bless~
That story has always held mystery for me. I completely enjoyed your telling, Vonnie. Your word choices are so perfect. <3
Congratulations on ranking 22 overall!