The Official Writing Challenge
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This has me smiling. You locked me into the story with empathy for the guy; then when you introduced his lady, I thought him loony for his not seeing and acting upon the certain love she had for him so many years past. Maybe he was simply prodigal in that respect.
I loved your story and it's beautifully written. You left me wanting to know what happened next.
Oh this entry had it all. Intrigue, hint of romance, compelling characters, and moving rapidly and easily.

I loved it. Thanks!

God bless~
I am trying to write better fiction; I think I need to read through all of your entries as part of my tuition! This is wonderful writing; you include small details that bring the main story to life, which is indeed a class act of writing. You truly are an inspiration to me, (I'm not just saying this to be nice I promise!). Blessing, Helen.
Very well-written story showing that one way to lure a man is still through his stomach! :) I enjoyed your lively narrative style, and the last line was great!

God bless~
CONGRATULATIONS on your E.C. for this wonderfully written story! :)
The way to a man's heart - and not a single 'waisted' word. Great work and a well-deserved placing.
Congratulations on your 3rd placing. Well-deserved.