The Official Writing Challenge
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Based on switch from 3rd to 1st person: this is a true story? If so, I like the tension of setting up the story at distance, and then bringing into context. Very compelling.
Awww what a beautiful and touching story. My heart felt this all the way through to the very last word.

I loved it - and if it is a true story...So sorry for your loss, but what an amazing transformation, thanks to the Lord.

God Bless~
Congratulations for ranking 12th in level 4 and 17th overall!
This is so sweet. My heart hurt for the MC but rejoiced in the way God watches over us.