The Official Writing Challenge
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This was enjoyable - and having an over active imagination myself, something I could totally relate to.

Good job! "To be continued about the pizza man..."

God Bless~
This was great. I found myself jumping a bit at different parts. Who would have guessed a suspense story for the topic of Spam.

I liked the ending, but wonder if it would have been stronger if it had the TV saying the person posed as a pizza deliverer and you left out the part about her telling the cat it looked like the same man.

Either way, it was a thrilling story and I'm glad it's daylight out because it made me a tad jumpy. Excellent writing!
A thriller woven around the topic...pretty cool! LOL Good job on this!
Your gripping "Mayhem and Maverick" is filled with intrigue and suspense. I loved this!
Congratulations for a job well done. God Bless~
Yah! Way to go Bus man! I'm so happy you are entering the challenges again!
Congratulations, Tim! Your story definitely kept me on the edge of my chair.

This grabbed me from the first paragraph to the ending. Glad I didn't read it on a stormy night when I was alone. Definitely filled with all the right ingredients that make a story successful. Congrats on your HC ranking.