The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful. Lots of mystery here. Id take this home with me if this was on the first page of a novel in a bookstore.
So would I, Anita - and I hope that happens one day. I would LOVE to read it all. So well done; an evocative, enchanting start to what must be a terrific novel. Such good writing here, please don't stop!
I experienced every nuance of this majical morning. Beautifully written. Sigh.
Morning is my favorite time, and your descriptive writing shows me why. Beautiful!
Congratulations in placing 11th in level 4 and 22 overall.