The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a masterfully written story, pulling the reader with each well chosen word into the world of a young boy/young man.
A fitting title for a powerfully written story. Well done.
I agree with the other comments. This is a beautifully told story. I love the details you tied together and excellent descriptions. Very nice.
An awesome story. But why so few comments?! There are so many lovely expression in this tale, but let me just point out the gentle, humorous way you described your MC's age. Delightful.
Congratulations Congratulations for ranking 9th in Masters and 13th overall!
How you managed to say so much in 750 or less words is unbelievable. You are truly a Master. You managed to sprinkle some humor in-this serious tale without it be offensive. Wow. Again congratulations!