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Enjoyed this behind-the-scenes look at a well-known story. The MC suffering from headache apparently due to atmospheric conditions helped me connect with him. Very nicely done.
I like the title! I think children have more spiritual sense than adults. We need to follow them more often.
I can easily identify with the father during life-storms. Your message showing the faith of the child and just Who is present in "our boat" is one of comfort. I applaud your skill in weaving this Bible story and the accompanying lesson.
Wow I really liked this. You depicted Jesus and his conversation with Jakob just like I imagine Jesus was with kids. The vision of Jesus ruffling the boy's hair really choked me up. Excellent writing.
The wisdom of Jesus when he said that we had to become like little children and just trust in him. This piece portrays this truth so well.
Very descriptive! I love the conversations between Jesus and the boy, and also the thoughts swirling in the father's head. Great re-telling!
The faith of a child. I enjoyed this. Thanks
Nicely done! I enjoyed this very much, and as a parent, could really identify with the MC.
Loved this insider's look at this story. Great insight and very well written. It brought tears to my eyes. How wonderful it would be to sit with Him like that.