The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/10
A great poem. I enjoyed the rhyme pattern and word choice. There seemed a very big jump between falling off the swing and getting married. Loved the last verse.
A lovely poem with a great title - how quickly the years pass!
I noticed the gap between leaves and marriage, too. However, this was still a great poem. Good job!
A beautiful story of life.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall.