The Official Writing Challenge
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Wh knew? Cute pointed story with a lesson. God Bless you, ruth
Sorry, I meant to say Who knew all that. Good story,and God bless you. Ruth
This is a great story. The characters pulled me in and kept me entertained for the whole trip.
How delightful! I love this!
I like the turn this story was a good thing to stink. Great characterizations too, very likeable.
Good character studies in your interesting story.
I'll splatter some green eco-friendly ink. Is it bad that I liked the sass of the girl that told her off? And am I awful for thinking how funny it would have been had DL not told her about the deodorant and let her get bit to death? And is it naughty of me to wonder what you really meant by the fruit inside is indescribably amazing? And finally, are you upset with me if I tell you that I don't think a fruity, smelly guy would strode?

;) Luv ya Shirley
Congratulations, Shirley!
I enjoyed this and was engaged beginning to end. Congratulations!
Fresh, current, believable and on topic. just great!