The Official Writing Challenge
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Oooohhh what a spooky tale of vengeance. I was on the edge of my seat with goosebumps. It was well-written and very much reminded me of Stephen King.
Part of a Book?
I enjoyed reading this, definitely full of suspense and you had my attention wanting to know what happened next. The only thing that hit me "off kilter" a bit was the depth of hateful revenge, BUT, that being said...if this is part of a book with more to the story, then I get it. Just felt sorry at first for the guy loosing his job until he violently got even :)
Great writing. However, I want to know what preceeded this scene and what comes after? It most definitely sounds like chapter (?) of a book.
Wow, that was quite the thriller tale. I felt like there was a lot of "telling" going on, it was hard for me to get a handle on the MC for myself. Great imagination with this one!