The Official Writing Challenge
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Gorgeous poem.Such beautiful pictures and well chosen words feed this poet's soul.
I love spring and your poem made me yearn for it to come again.
Lovely poem. This really captures the beauty and wonder of spring.
Loved this! So descriptive!
hmmmm...for some reason reading this took me back to my vague early childhood memories of spring time in my yard....thanks for the time travel trip!
This was so vibrant, with just the perfect word choices. The colours and sounds fairly leaped off of the screen.
oh my...Took my breath away. AWESOME!!
WOW. Beautifully descriptive. I loved the phrases "Stays out beyond the winter curfew" and "A tiny earthquake heralds a naked, mewling chick". Nicely done!
Two simple words: Gorgeous and beautiful!
oh, WOW! Note the capital letters, lol. This is powerfully done. Your words are masterfully chosen and they showcase exactly what I feel spring is. This is a favorite of mine this week! Wonderful writing!
Wonderfully written. I'm not a big poetry fan because a lot of the time I can't understand what's being said, but you captured Spring perfectly with this poem.
"the greyscale days surrender" Just about perfect.