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And Canada is the richer for the heritage gained through its immigrant population. Nicely done.
You have many memorable lines in this excellent poem, but my favorite one was:
Summer baked and autumn aged.
Fabulous rhyme and meter. I love the tale told through your poetry; a enjoyable lesson on the history of 2 countries. Lovely.
Just beautiful imagery and storytelling in this lovely verse. Fascinating history I knew nothing of too. Wonderful.
I can't imagine what it must be like to have to leave your country and start life anew, but you captured the thoughts and feelings beautifully.
This is beautiful! I didn't know anything about this bit of history, and you told it with such elegance.
A poetic memoir of someone's journey to a new land and forging a new life. Love it!
Gorgeous poetry! You evoked deep feeling with the words you chose to tell the story.
Wow. This is very well done.
What an enjoyable way to learn history! Beautiful.