The Official Writing Challenge
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Elegant descriptions and a good application to boot. Well done.
You presented a wonderful lesson based on fantastic images.
Wonderful images AND lesson. A lovely piece.
"fantasia of fragrance"
Ooo I like that! :)

I think the Butchart Garden people would be very pleased to read what you have written here. :)

Very nice!

Your descriptions of the sunken gardens make me want to go! Very interesting and enjoyable history lesson. I like the ending, too.
I enjoyed this.

You've really recreated the Butchart gardens with words here.
It always saddens me when I see nature wounded by man's endeavors. There is a quarry in the side of one of the mountains here that breaks my heart everytime I see it.

However, this story reminds me that what is broken can be made beautiful once again. I looked up the gardens after reading this, and I'm so glad you turned me on to a historical landmark that I was not aware existed until now.