The Official Writing Challenge
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I found this story to be very interesting, as well as informational. Well done.
Fascinating story. I hadn't heard about the new law "two children" if both parents have no siblings. (Very interesting.) I smiled at your "three goods" statement. You are an amazing person.
This made for a fascinating read, particularly in that you bring out the sense of loneliness experienced by a visitor to Australia. (Many of the other entries this week are overwhelmingly positive.) I did however feel a little swamped by the huge volume of facts and observations. I suspect that the story could do with a little house-keeping - prune away some of the content and expand some of the major key events. But well done
It is tough to go anywhere where you know no one and must adapt to a new culture. You described the struggle well.
I loved knowing from the beginning this was based on truth. Wonderfully written, and completely engaging.