The Official Writing Challenge
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I found this story to be very interesting, as well as informational. Well done.
01/24/09
Fascinating story. I hadn't heard about the new law "two children" if both parents have no siblings. (Very interesting.) I smiled at your "three goods" statement. You are an amazing person.
01/25/09
This made for a fascinating read, particularly in that you bring out the sense of loneliness experienced by a visitor to Australia. (Many of the other entries this week are overwhelmingly positive.) I did however feel a little swamped by the huge volume of facts and observations. I suspect that the story could do with a little house-keeping - prune away some of the content and expand some of the major key events. But well done
01/26/09
It is tough to go anywhere where you know no one and must adapt to a new culture. You described the struggle well.
01/27/09
I loved knowing from the beginning this was based on truth. Wonderfully written, and completely engaging.