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I love all the personalities, and the humor throughout this delightful piece. Enjoyed this immensely!
Good going with your gaggle of alliteration. Your gang of geese were great fun.
Oh my giddy giggles! What a fun story. I loved the "I must have put on a few pounds this winter". Just as well it isn't Christmas :- )

This was very well done, especially the attributing human traits to the geese, very well done Yvonne.
Very cute! I love the alliteration of the names, too. Fun story.
I love watching the geese come north again in the Spring and love the personalities you created in this lovely story!
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.
This was outstanding! I loved it.