The Official Writing Challenge
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Ooooh, how sad! I'm glad that Henry has an Aunt Cat to stay with and the hope at the end, was tangible. I wanted it end 'happy' but ending as it did, gave more meaning to this piece. Thanks a bunch for sharing it-there's lots to think about here. ^_^
04/26/08
Oh! Loved this story. How sad when little things cause such a disruption in families. Thank you for the reminder.
Laury
What a powerful reminder that we may not have tomorrow...
This rang true to me on so many levels. Dialog was right on as well. Keep writing.