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This is the cutest thing I've read in a while... your first encounter with this little one is hilarious. Good story - and a happy ending to boot!
Oh, do I ever LOVE this! Your descriptions are amazingly amazing and your voice is absolutely delightful and captivating. Oh, and of course, there's the message. Wonderful all around.
This was so much fun to read. Joy sounds like she has quite the personality. This is written very well -- the dialogue was perfect. Good job.
I love all of your sensory details and your wit. Great story!
Great title, and I loved the story very refreshing.
I was captivated by you as a lemon with legs and then by your kidnapper. Delightful story