The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/07
Enjoyed this piece a lot.
11/16/07
Had to read it twice, but when my mind finally tuned into your channel, I really enjoyed it. Great stuff. God bless.
11/16/07
Oh so clever! This one had me guessing until the end. Love it.
11/18/07
Ha..Ha... I loved the suspense. I knew the names had to mean something, but didn't quite get it. You definitely showed the double feelings of a writer.
What clever, well-crafted fun! How do I request a visit from Ins? I could use one this week. LOL
11/20/07
How clever. This is great! It definitely takes a second read after you know the secret. :) Fun, fun, fun -- I love it!
11/21/07
Very clever! I enjoyed the back and forth dialogue of this "couple", and knowing the secret at the end, makes it even more enjoyable to read the second time.